Pirate Adventure Kid Stories

>> Tuesday, January 26, 2010

My Little Eddie loves to write stories. He had wrote these using Microsoft Word about two months ago, and thought that I would share them with you. Looks like we are going on a pirate adventure to a sunken ship.

The Pirates Adventure

Their was a pirate ship at the dock. The pirates got on board. And sailed to the water and the admiral said ‘’we need a deck hand’’ and sailed to land and found a suspended pirate from another ship and the admiral then said ‘’we need a cook.’’ and sailed to some land and found another suspended pirate from another ship. And the admiral then said we need a
pirate that will use the weapons.’’ and they sailed to some more land and found a suspended pirate from another ship. The captain asked for a meatloaf when the cook brought the meatloaf the captain ate it in one bite! And the captain then asked for a turkey sandwich and when the cook brought it the captain ate it in one bite! The deck hand asked for a turkey leg. and the admiral found an enemy ship and said ’’fire.’’ they beat the enemy ship. The deck hand saw an enemy ship and said ’’fire.’’ and the cannons went bam. they beat the enemy ship. the pirates took a map out. And the admiral said ‘’turn left.’’ then the admiral said ‘’forward.’’ and then the admiral said ’’turn right.’’ the admiral said ‘’land!’’ they found treasure. And they then returned to the dock.

The Sunken Ship
There is a ship at a dock. The people got on board. The captain had sailed it to some rough waters. A battleship’s captain was blind and shot the ship up. the ship sunk. A crew came up and saw the ship sink. The crew had a diver. The crew had gave the diver an objective to explore the sunken ship. the diver dived into the water. The diver arrived at the sunken ship. He saw some dead people. The diver saw some chemicals. He saw a skull. He exited the room where he saw the skull. He exited the room where he saw some chemicals. He exited the room where he saw some dead people. He went up. He went to the surface. The crew rested for a minute. Then when the crew woke up the crew went back to their dock.

I had left everything as he has done it, and did not change a thing. These are his original stories, and I wanted to keep them just as they were. Thanks for reading and I hope that you will enjoy them.

4 special comments:

Jen January 26, 2010 at 10:53 AM  

Ah, very good:) Jen.

Mama Ko January 26, 2010 at 3:06 PM  

Wonderful story. He is smart to have write story like that.

kat January 26, 2010 at 9:14 PM  

wonderful kid. He has a potential to be a writer someday. That's a good start for him.

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Riza January 28, 2010 at 11:35 PM  

Your child has a good imagination, you might want to encourage him to write some more by buying him colorful story books. My daughter loves playing with clays and she makes stories as she creates the characters. I just hope she doesn't use up all my baby powder, summer is soon, hehehe!

Have a wonderful weekend!