The 2 Birds By: Eddie

I thought that I would share a story that Eddie my eight year old wrote. He thought that it would be a good idea to put it on my blog to share with you. Hope you enjoy it.
I did not alter his work.

There is 2 birds sitting in a nest. 1 bird left that was the daddy bird. The baby bird was trying to fly but, it fell and tumbled to the ground but, luckily it didn’t break a bone. The bird reattempted and flew his dad was exploring the swamp. The bird was afraid his dad would have flew into an alligator’s mouth. And the baby bird said ‘’come on this way.’’ and then the baby bird said ’’I will lead you to the nest.’’ he was afraid of being alone in the nest. The 2 birds went past the hills and then past the mountains and past the river and finally to the nest. The baby bird said that he was afraid of going 3,000 feet in the air. And he was finding a new place to explore and the baby bird said ’’let’s go explore the forest’’ and off they went to the forest and saw a snake eating a bird it wasn’t 1 of the 2 birds. It was a mocking bird. And saw a boa constrictor that just choked a black rat. And when he was at the mountains he had to fly 6,000 feet in the air. And he was double scared. And they saw a cottonmouth eat a cotton rat. The were scared to death. They left the forest. the 2 birds went past the swamp and past the hills and past the mountains and past the river and finally to the nest. The baby bird wasn’t scared at the mountains this time!